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Jane Duncan Rogers's avatar

Monica, you are such a great writer. I love how you’re creating Clara. She’s having a very different life experience from what I’ve had, but it’s so beautiful to watch and witness her unfolding. Like a butterfly beginning to realise it’s time to come out of its cocoon (if that’s the right analogy). She’s birthing herself into the world, and it’s lovely to watch.

Monica Hebert's avatar

Thank you for this. I swear Clara is teaching me as much as she’s revealing herself to you. I’m watching her stretch, blink at the light, and realize she’s allowed to build a life that feels like hers. Different from mine, different from yours, but deeply true to her. I’m so glad you’re witnessing her becoming.

Maryan Pelland Pen2Profit's avatar

I like Clara. A lot.

Monica Hebert's avatar

That means everything—especially coming from you. Clara's becoming real to me too, which is both thrilling and a little terrifying. Thank you for seeing her. ❤️

Rachel Carruth's avatar

Your passion for humanity shines through Clara's story. Love ripples softly catching my breath and reminding me that I matter. Thank you for the gentle nudge.

Monica Hebert's avatar

Oh, what a beautiful reflection. If Clara’s story reminded you that you matter, then she’s doing exactly what she came here to do. That soft ripple you felt? That’s the soul whispering yes, again. Thank you for letting it land.